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I went skating down at the pond. Three kids from my school were there. We fell down again and again.We laughed so much our stomachs hurt.

I thought the lopsided game would never end. The score just kept getting worse and worse.

Martha thinks she's so cool, but she's not cool to me.

Joe watched the video that his mom bought for him from the store she worked at.

Susan loved to watch football. She watched it every Sunday on T.V. Saturdays she would go to the local college football games. She would always wear the school colors.

Being Angry

One time my boyfriend and I were on a date and we were having a good time. Then he started talking about this girl (Brittany) that he worked with. He said he was thinking about moving in with her because he was tired of living off of my parents. I was really hurt and mad. I started yelling at him. Then when he was trying to calm me down I accidently hit him. So then he packed his stuff and moved back in with his mom. That was a very bad night, but now we are still together.

Sentence combining

Janet directed the band and played the drums.
Anthony and Jake are fine writers.
Maria just finished reading War and Peace cause she is a fast reader.
That girl is a whiz at math, but she has calculator in her hand.

Thanksgiving Day weekend

For the first half I went to Albany to stay with my grandma. It was okay I helped her do lawn work and clean her house. We had a big dinner with my family on Wednesday. Then on Thanksgiving we just stayed home bored.

Thanksgiving Day weekend

For the first half I went to Albany to stay with my grandma. It was okay I helped her do lawn work and clean her house. We had a big dinner with my family on Wednesday. Then on Thanksgiving we just stayed home bored.

I wish it was summer time
No bed time , No school
Freedom from the world